“Shuggie Bain” by Douglas Stuart (post 1): Two versions of Booker Prize-winning novel’s first paragraph, mine and the author’s
Guess which is mine and which is the author’s:
“The day was flat. He was doing his routine work, but was preoccupied with tomorrow. Tomorrow was something to look forward to.”
“The day was flat. That morning his mind had abandoned him and left his body wandering down below. The empty body went listlessly through its routine, pale and vacant-eyed under the fluorescent strip lights, as his soul floated above the aisles and thought only of tomorrow. Tomorrow was something to look forward to.”
The second version describes a dissociative experience. (Multiple personality, a.k.a. dissociative identity, is a dissociative condition.) The person’s mind is split in two, one part doing the job and the other thinking of tomorrow, but the reader is given only the latter point of view, and this mind is not aware of what the other mind might be thinking, except that, judging by the body language, it seems bored and unhappy.
The author’s version is the dissociative one. But I’m only up to page 36. So I don’t know whether the protagonist is prone to dissociation or the author just thought that his version was more literary or both.
1. Douglas Stuart. Shuggie Bain. New York, Grove Press, 2020.
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