“Whisper of Warning” by Laura Griffin: Italicized alternate personality states key fact at top of page, the protagonist not till the bottom
“I [the bartender] haven’t seen him around lately…Her either…
“That’s because they’re dead.” [italicized voice in protagonist’s head]
“How had she [Courtney] sat here, in this very bar, and not realized she was being played by a cheap-tipping lawyer in a three-thousand-dollar suit? Just thinking about it made her chest burn. And then all that burning anger was replaced with fear as she glanced around the bar and realized two of the people who used to come here were dead now” (1, pp. 153-154).
Comment: Search “italicized” in this blog for past posts discussing its use by novelists to indicate a voice in the head from an alternate personality, reflecting novelists’ multiple personality trait. But this is the first novel I’ve seen in which the alternate personality makes a point before the character.
1. Laura Griffin. Whisper of Warning. New York, Pocket Star Books, 2009.
2. Wikipedia. “Laura Griffin.” https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Laura_Griffin
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